Less is often more. Substantive editing, whether language, structural, stylistic, or copy editing, or a combination of the three is intended to ensure that document is suitable for its intended purpose and targeted readership.
Structural editing focuses on logical organization and flow of content to render your document clear, concise, and easy to read at the sentence, paragraph, and chapter levels.
This structural edit clarifies your position by developing your narrative to ensure your information conveys accurately and logically.
The Transfer of Knowledge and thought leadership is often quite tricky.